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Billy
post Jan 4 2009, 10:28 AM
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Here is a link to the first part of a video I made about The Police.

If you take the time to watch it I hope you enjoy it.

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Billy



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post Jan 18 2009, 07:12 PM
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Billy, I think you have too many little interuptions. It's good that you mix it up with the little pictures, but every 3-4 seconds PREDICTABLY halting the flow of things kind of kills the whole momentum.

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post Jan 21 2009, 06:50 AM
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Thanks for the feedback.
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post Jan 21 2009, 01:33 PM
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There's a technical term for it: Lord Privy Seals. Basically any time you say something and immediately follow it with a shot of said thing. Like I say, "It's raining outside.", CUT TO window to show it's raining outside.

I liked two or three of then. Sexy policewoman would have been funnier if it came out of left field, a.k.a no other obvious pictures around that.


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